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Post  Squall Cloud Thu Jun 26, 2008 11:10 pm

SC: Your match was long and drawn out, "Champs" as great as yourself with such a gratifying name, should be able to live up to that. True champs can dispose of the wannabes and posers with ease. Karze, you and your partner were so dead tired by the end, anyone who threw a finisher would win at that point. Frankly, I don't think you have the Stamina, or the guts, to face Pedro and myself.

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Post  Karze Fri Jun 27, 2008 1:06 pm

*Looks at Squall Cloud*

Karze: Tired you say? If you're not tired at the end of the day, your exercise hasn't been hard enough. That's what this match was. An exercise. John and I used it to try out some new moves and to make us ready for some real competition. I don't even know if it is possible for us to get that kind of competition in this fed, seeing that most tag teams here talk big, but doesn't really have the skills to back up their words. However. We will continue to beat up anyone foolish enough to think that they are able to get the belts from us. First The Impact Players. Then whoever is stupid enough to set foot in the ring with us. Crime & Punishment will prevail.

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Post  Squall Cloud Fri Jun 27, 2008 8:07 pm

SC: Ha, with the matches you guys accept and pick, no you won't get that kind of competition. You keep ducking true gladiators of the ring. Almost anyone symbioted with one of the real competitors of this fed (Pedro, Myself, Rosin, Tsikenonwaristak) could take your tag down. Rosin bit off more than he could chew, taking a guy not even half his ability as a partner when he went up against the Impact Players. But his point was proven. If those are the "top contenders" and Rosin + noob= that close of a match...

[iSquall Cloud pauses.... grins... and speaks again[/i]

SC: I'd hate to see how bad the injuries are to people when a real tag team shows up. Everyone wanted competition and a show in the tag matches. well, you got it. I can't speak for Pedro, but I myself spare no quarter to the meek.

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Post  John The Brick Rose Sat Jun 28, 2008 7:04 am

*John "The Brick" Rose walks on the scene and stands beside Karze.*

Brick: Squall Cloud is it? Let me put this into terms you can understand. You're living in a dream world. You see yourself on the top of a pedestal, talking of being the best in the federation? Yet, you haven't actually proven squat. And now you and Pedro want a shot at these belts? Yet you forget, The Impact Players have won their spot. Despite that little stunt you pulled on Friday night. When the season begins anew, you will have your chance to prove your worth. Until then, get your head out of the clouds . . . no pun intended. If you aren't careful, this will be YOUR Final Fantasy.

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Post  Pedro Legend Sat Jun 28, 2008 10:22 am

PL: So you guys can talk the talk but I sure as hell know that you can't walk the walk and we'll prove that next season!

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Post  Squall Cloud Sat Jun 28, 2008 10:36 am

John The Brick Rose wrote:*John "The Brick" Rose walks on the scene and stands beside Karze.*

Brick: Squall Cloud is it? Let me put this into terms you can understand. You're living in a dream world. You see yourself on the top of a pedestal, talking of being the best in the federation? Yet, you haven't actually proven squat. And now you and Pedro want a shot at these belts? Yet you forget, The Impact Players have won their spot. Despite that little stunt you pulled on Friday night. When the season begins anew, you will have your chance to prove your worth. Until then, get your head out of the clouds . . . no pun intended. If you aren't careful, this will be YOUR Final Fantasy.

SC: The only one fantasizing here is you. I don't need a pedestal to stand on to tower above two small fries like you two. I haven't proven squat you say? I've been kind enough not to seriously injure our federation out of the kindness of my heart, but Rosin once told me, that the kindness gets me no where. So I'm just finging all the meek and undeserving, who tout themselves off as champions, and I will systematically eliminate them all! Impact players won their spot, against a NOOB and ill=prepared vet. Rosin over stepped the limits of his abilitiy in taking TD- Dudley as his partner. Dudely isn't worthy to lick the **** off my boots. Yet you brag about their win. Y? Because you know, the Impact players don't Impact Anything but week competition and a guarentee of your championship. That stunt we pulled friday night. Was a cheap shot, I'[ll admit it, but its no more cheap than your title. As well as who your top contenders are. The only Clouds around here right now, are the Clouds of szmoke from your stoned ass thinking you're a champion.

Squall Cloud pauses for a moment.... mutters something in Espanol to Pedro, and continues

SC: In FACT Pedro and I, will ALLOW you, to have a 3rd member. a 3rd person, a UNSPECIFIED, anonymous person help you out at any given point in the match. and I will STILL guarentee, that your side will not prevail. Take a look within your fed bro. You're on the down low. Pedro and I are 2 of the top 5. You bit off way more than you can chew. Plus, you say I haven't proven squat... right?

SC: One word D*bag. Palmares. compare yours to mine, then we'll talk.

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Post  John The Brick Rose Sat Jun 28, 2008 3:00 pm

OOC: Ok first off, censored with *** or not, I think you're going a little overboard with the language. Second, there is not 3 on 2 matches available at this time.
Third, Palmares are impressive, but mean nothing in the RP world of CFWA.
Fourth, Season 4 will be your chance to win the belts, assuming Kris approves a number one contenders bout between Far East Donkey Punch and Titanium Rage. I would suggest turning your focus there as Crime and Punishment have their feud with Impact Players to finish first.

On a side note, it's good to have you two back in the RP's, I'm sure you will both do well in the tag division.

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Post  Dragonfist Sat Jun 28, 2008 3:36 pm

OOC:Wezzy always was asking, no begging Kris for a title shot, but he never did anything. He got suspended for asking so many times. That's why he left. He didn't get any attention.

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Post  The Xecutioner Sat Jun 28, 2008 4:22 pm

Devinne Execution appears on the titratron.*

The Xecutioner: Crime and Punishment there are a new tag team in CFWA and it is DEVINNE EXECUTIONNNNN!!!!

Crime and Punishment look in shock.*

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Post  Squall Cloud Sat Jun 28, 2008 8:04 pm

John The Brick Rose wrote:OOC: Ok first off, censored with *** or not, I think you're going a little overboard with the language. Second, there is not 3 on 2 matches available at this time.
Third, Palmares are impressive, but mean nothing in the RP world of CFWA.
Fourth, Season 4 will be your chance to win the belts, assuming Kris approves a number one contenders bout between Far East Donkey Punch and Titanium Rage. I would suggest turning your focus there as Crime and Punishment have their feud with Impact Players to finish first.

On a side note, it's good to have you two back in the RP's, I'm sure you will both do well in the tag division.

OOC: Language will be toned down. 3 on 2 matches was not requested, was made as a statement of your inferiority, as well as saying even if theres a match edit, i'd have the confidence. Palmares mean nothing in the RP world? so they will never mean anything? theres no way to incorporate palmares into RP? (thats like a ban on creativity like in a socialist government, but thats my 2 cents.) Just cause I RP in a different style. and response to 4th. Setting the groundwork. if you look at other postings I've said, several times. I've stated that Far East Donkey Punch, will take on titanium rage, crime and punishment, divine execution, redneck and management planner, etc, etc. EVERY tag team IN the federation In the necessary order needed

[/quote="The Management Planner"]OOC: I totally agree with John - you may have a 'better' wrestler in TWG, but that counts for nothing in the fed. Nor should it; titles should be earned, not handed out on a plate. It's that same attitude that got Wezzy where he is today.

We're all glad you've decided to join the fabulous world of RP, but remember that there are at least a dozen characters who have been regularly active in the fed, so please join the queue (and as John says, tone down the language)

Good luck for season 4 Very Happy[/quote]

OOC: again, pointing out the inferiority of wrestlers compared to mine. Setting ground work. Where in anywhere am I asking for a title shot? where. find me one spot where I'm asking for one? I'm saying the people who have it, don't have it on merit of their skill or anything, they have it on merit of they've been RPing longer, or more, etc. and through that, and their skill compared to the OTHER people that RP frequently. and I'll point you to a quote of mine [/quote="Squall Cloud"] If you look at other postings I've said, several times... I've stated that Far East Donkey Punch, will take on titanium rage, crime and punishment, divine execution, redneck and management planner, etc, etc. EVERY tag team IN the federation In the necessary order needed [/quote]


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Post  John The Brick Rose Sat Jun 28, 2008 8:21 pm

OOC - Fair enough. I apologize on the fact of saying you're demanding anything. It seemed that from the avg reader it was implied that you wanted a shot at the titles. That was my fault, and yes I missed the quote about Necessary order.

As for Palmares, it's how it is addressed. I would suggest a line like, "I am well known outside of the CWFA for my accomplishments. I have held titles in all levels of competition (as a way to address your palmares for different levels). I am a 7 time tag team champion, a 5 time Last Man Standing . . . etc). I'm not saying ignore your accomplishments in any way, and being a writer I definitly don't want to imply censorship, just offering advice on how to approach it differently. I was short on time earlier and should have expanded more.

I have no issues with you laying the groundwork for an arrogant heel character. In fact that's the best type, because you always need someone everyone loves to hate. Sometimes though your RP's come across as a mix of RP and reality, so it is hard to see if it's RP or OOC. I hope that clears up some of the miscommunication on my part

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Post  Squall Cloud Sat Jun 28, 2008 8:35 pm

John The Brick Rose wrote:OOC - Fair enough. I apologize on the fact of saying you're demanding anything. It seemed that from the avg reader it was implied that you wanted a shot at the titles. That was my fault, and yes I missed the quote about Necessary order.

As for Palmares, it's how it is addressed. I would suggest a line like, "I am well known outside of the CWFA for my accomplishments. I have held titles in all levels of competition (as a way to address your palmares for different levels). I am a 7 time tag team champion, a 5 time Last Man Standing . . . etc). I'm not saying ignore your accomplishments in any way, and being a writer I definitly don't want to imply censorship, just offering advice on how to approach it differently. I was short on time earlier and should have expanded more.

I have no issues with you laying the groundwork for an arrogant heel character. In fact that's the best type, because you always need someone everyone loves to hate. Sometimes though your RP's come across as a mix of RP and reality, so it is hard to see if it's RP or OOC. I hope that clears up some of the miscommunication on my part

OOC: when something is out of character, i use notation "OOC" to signify out of character. and. alright, now that you have elaborated on the palmares and your take of it. gotcha. and can do that.

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Post  Squall Cloud Sat Jun 28, 2008 8:43 pm

SC: I am by far the most established wrestler outside of the CWFA. Outside the CWFA people go who in gee whiz is John "The Brick" Rose, or Management... what?
Take a look at some of my MINOR accomplishments:
1st Lvl Champion: 1 victories and 6 defenses
2nd Lvl Champion: 3 victories and 2 defenses
2nd Lms Lvl Champion: 1 victories and 0 defenses
3rd Lvl Champion: 2 victories and 1 defenses
3rd Lms Lvl Champion: 9 victories and 34 defenses
4th Lvl Champion: 1 victories and 2 defenses
4th Lms Lvl Champion: 1 victories and 2 defenses
5th Lvl Champion: 5 victories and 9 defenses
5th FB Lvl Champion: 8 victories and 2 defenses
5th Lms Lvl Champion: 12 victories and 20 defenses
6th Lms Lvl Champion: 6 victories and 10 defenses
6th FB Lvl Champion: 8 victories and 6 defenses
6th Lvl Champion: 5 victories and 18 defenses
7th Lvl Champion: 7 victories and 24 defenses
7th FB Lvl Champion: 4 victories and 5 defenses
7th Lms Lvl Champion: 5 victories and 16 defenses
8th FB Lvl Champion: 4 victories and 5 defenses
8th Lvl Champion: 10 victories and 23 defenses
8th Lms Lvl Champion: 6 victories and 6 defenses
8th Sub Lvl Champion: 4 victories and 2 defenses
1st Lvl Tag Champ: 9 victories and 10 defenses
2nd Lvl Tag Champ: 9 victories and 11 defenses
3rd Lvl Tag Champ: 44 victories and 107 defenses
4th Lvl Tag Champ: 25 victories and 130 defenses
5th Lvl Tag Champ: 14 victories and 46 defenses
6th Lvl Tag Champ: 58 victories and 117 defenses
7th Lvl Tag Champ: 6 victories and 3 defenses
Avenge 8 won: 1 times
Tournaments lvl 1 won: 1 times
Tournaments lvl 3 won: 2 times
Tournaments lvl 5 won: 1 times
Tournaments lvl 6 won: 3 times
Tournaments lvl 7 won: 3 times
Tournaments lvl 8 won: 1 times


(OOC: with another level 8 tournament winner to be decided within the next few hours.)

SC: I let my wrestling, and reputation do the talking. All i hear from other tag teams is empty words, and threats of how bad they'll beat me. I just don't see anything. My daddy use to have a few sayings he'd tell me:
1. Actions speak more loudly than words.
2. No guts no glory
3. Wait until someone else hits you, then wait for their next shot, avoid it, and pop them behind the elbow snapping bone and cartiledge, don't stop the fight till they beg for mercy or pass out.
I believe in those 3 things cause I find them to be true. Anybody steps in the ring with me. Best come at the top of their game.

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